Second Opinion On Flight Vid

lo ive just done a landing with my Spanair A320 at Palma only to have my friend who has a PPL critiscise what i thought was a perfectly good landing, so could I send someone a flight vid. my email is [email protected] so if u mail me i can send it to u back.the vids the final approach, i was going to start it from the point that i entered the approach but it went on for over 10 mins.